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27.07.2020
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Griffy[OP]
27.07.2020 21:41
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And say "Tartar Sauce!" if you'd like me to answer these questions for you too :D
27.07.2020 21:41
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tartar sauce!
27.07.2020 21:43
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well, i think your drawing style is recognizable and i like it! your animations are pretty smooth as well. i'm not too sure about your roleplaying since i've never seen you do it. um, i would say to work on proportions, but your art is pretty good already. i personally would like to see more animated posts. also, you're like a really nice person.
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27.07.2020 21:53
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I think you do a great job animating. I checked out a few of your recent animations, and they all told a clear story. I would suggest trying to smooth out your lineart and working with color-schemes to really make your art pop, but other than that, your style is recognizable and admirable. I love it :D You're also one of the few people on here who has some really cool backgrounds so kudos to you. I do suggest you work on proportions by drawing characters from different angles as well as holding different expressions. I really like seeing your animations that follow Nathan's story. I've only really looked at a few of them, but now I'm digging through your stuff to keep updated haha. I haven't really talked with you before- I have a bad memory so maybe I did, idk- but you seem really cool and honest. Thank you for your support and participation!
27.07.2020 21:46
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1) Drawing: 8.5/10 Animating: 9/10 2) I don't know how you roleplay 3) I don't know what you can work on honestly,, I think its just that I like styles that are different from yours? I don't know,, I'm more into cutesy art styles so I would give your art 9/10 if I didn't have this opinion 4) I want to see more of animations, even though you make more than a lot of users on her Tartar sauce!
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27.07.2020 22:01
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Haha, thank you! I think you have a great drawing style as well as color palette and character design. I'm not going to use a number scale just because that's so cut-and-dry, but I do have to say your drawings are so aesthetically pleasing. I would suggest you work on drawing characters in a variety of poses and from different angles. You have a 2D style, which works great for your aesthetic, but if you want to work into 3D, I suggest you try drawing more detailed backgrounds as well as shading. As for animation, I don't see many, but the ones you do have are very smooth. I'd love to see more scenes like the one I attached. Things like this have such a cozy look to them and they make me so happy just looking at them. Keep up the amazing work and regardless of what anyone says, you are great at what you do. Never stop drawing, and keep up the great work!
27.07.2020 22:21
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Thank you!!
Griffy[OP]
27.07.2020 22:31
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No, thank you! I really appreciate the feedback.
27.07.2020 21:48
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(I’m just going to rate this first one out of 10, if that’s ok? ) 1. 8/10 The animating is super smooth, but it could be a little smoother It seemed kinda choppy, but only a little bit. 9/10 2. I haven’t seen you role play, so I can’t give my opinion on this. 3. Hmm, I think that your art already looks amazing, but I honestly think that you should work on more diverse backgrounds, and that’s about it. 4. I’d like to see more animations from you! They’re satisfying and nice to look at
27.07.2020 21:48
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Uh tartar sauce
Griffy[OP]
27.07.2020 22:14
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That's absolutely fine with me! I'm not going to use a numbering system, though, so sorry if that's what you were looking for. I absolutely love your style. It has an original accent to it and I find it recognizable. Your colors are outstanding and your backgrounds tie everything in together quite nicely. Your shading is amazing, and your fades are practically seamless. I think your animations are super smooth and enjoyable to watch, too. I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into what you draw. I think you should try making your lineart smoother as well as using different poses and expressions. Sometimes your characters come across as stiff, but that also might just be part of the style. I'd also suggest trying to use different perspectives to add depth to your backgrounds. I really want to see more art like your profile picture. I also really liked your BNA animation, and would enjoy seeing more animations like that too. Like you said about mine, they're satisfying and nice to look at :D
27.07.2020 21:50
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1. 9/10 on both 2. pretty sure you're good 3. well, uh, maybe you should try experimenting with different animals, colors, and shapes (idk) 4. ooh i would want to see more roleplaying and drawings. yeah i love your drawings. tartar sauce
Griffy[OP]
27.07.2020 22:31
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You have such an adorable 2D style, and your lineart is so smooth! It's so simplistic and I gotta say it's adorable. You don't necessarily animate a bunch, but what movement you do include in your anims definitely pulls the point across. I think you should incorporate different shapes into some of your characters to give them a more defined form. You could also try adding backgrounds to your drawings which will help give your characters more of an apparent personality. I would also suggest using solid colors to shade. (I forgot what it's called but the best example I could find is like this https://www.animatorisland.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/5_MoodShading.jpg ) I think that kind of shading will work better with your style. I haven't seen you roleplay, but I'd love to do one with you sometime. I'd love to see more drawings with multiple characters interacting with each other. Your drawings are just so cute and simple- I like them a lot :D
27.07.2020 22:38
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omg thank you! that really helps!
Griffy[OP]
27.07.2020 22:45
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As does your insight. I really appreciate it!
Griffy[OP]
27.07.2020 23:18
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Also, it's called Cell Shading if you wanted to look it up :D
27.07.2020 22:04
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1: 8-9/10, love the art, and the animating is really smooth for the amount of details 2. Love your roleplaying style, its semi-detailed and takes up a good amount of time 3. Backgrounds, perhaps oddly shaped creatures/ocs that are not truly human or are less commonly used 4. Roleplaying (Wonder if we can cont ours), drawing, and especially animating tartar sauce
Griffy[OP]
27.07.2020 22:44
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Your characters are so creative and colorful. I love it that you almost always color your drawings. You also have some pretty cool backgrounds that I absolutely admire. Something I was taught in artschool is that a good character design can be easily re-drawn by someone else. Some of your characters have so many great details that it takes away from the character itself. You could also work on your lineart and posing. Give your characters more exaggerated poses and expressions to really make them pop. I think your coloring and perspective is pretty good, but again, feel free to exaggerate those aspects. I want to see more of Subject-0011 and her story. She's a really interesting character and I want to see more. I think you're a great roleplayer too. You give the perfect amount of description so that others understand where the character is, what their mindset is, and what they're doing. Keep up the great work and never stop drawing. You improve with every drawing you make!
27.07.2020 22:54
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Ooo okay, and ye I'm trying to post more of her on "her account" aka my alt lol
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27.07.2020 22:54
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Cool :D I'll keep an eye on it!
27.07.2020 22:13
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Drawing: 9/10 I love how you color the lines and the line art is so smooth and your anatomy is great. Animating: 9.5/10 your anatomy is great again, it’s is very smooth, and your style for animation is really cute and not so simplified. Idk how you role play sorry Hmm.. the shading is sometimes really hard to see, Maybe try in dramatic scenes for darker shading. Ocs, animated wwyd, scenes. Tarter sauce
27.07.2020 22:13
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Tartar* xD
Griffy[OP]
27.07.2020 23:15
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I like your character designs! You have a really fun and chaotic look to your characters. I think your coloring and shading are pretty good too. Your style of drawing is kind of sketchy, which can sometimes make things hard to distinguish. Simple shading like in the animation I attached can help viewers understand what's what, though. I'd really like to see more backgrounds for your characters, as well as full-body images of them. Your designs are super creative, and I really like what you come up with. I hope this is helpful, and never stop drawing! Keep up the great work!
27.07.2020 23:44
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Ah thanks!
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