Tear's room
86 comments
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:05
LinkUmmmm... what
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:10
LinkTear * Frowns * " Is something wrong...?" * Fixes nuse so it will fit around ShadowDaFox's neck *
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:12
Link.....
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:14
LinkTear * smiles * " so..... what chair do u prefer? purple or pink?
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:14
LinkPurple.....
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:15
LinkOk why is there a paw there....
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:15
LinkI like gore and all but seriously..
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:17
LinkTear " Don't mind that, its..........um......well.....a.. prop! Yea,... a prop...." * puts chair under nuse * " come come, get on the chair now.."
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:18
LinkUhhh...uhh.uhh ok.. (hides phone while calling friend)
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:19
LinkTear " If u even think about calling someone........ it will be very unlucky for that person aswell as you......."
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:19
Link(Silents phone)
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:20
LinkUhhh..
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:20
LinkI was just checking on my mom....yeah!
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:20
LinkTear " STAND ON THE CHAIR WITH YOUR HANDS IN THE AIR NOW!"
LonerFuntimeFoxy
22.11.2017 02:20
Link*Stomps into room and slaps Tear*
BAD
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:21
LinkPhew thanks FF
LonerFuntimeFoxy
22.11.2017 02:21
Link(☞ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)☞ I always have ur back
SmilingNyan
22.11.2017 02:22
LinkIt's spelt noose, edgelord
LonerFuntimeFoxy
22.11.2017 02:23
LinkYeah it is Noose
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:23
LinkTear " correct me again and i will get another chair for u.......!"
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:23
Link(Slaps tear)
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:24
LinkTear * Bites LonerFuntimeFoxy's face and smears blood everywhere *
SmilingNyan
22.11.2017 02:24
LinkSpaces don't go before whatever's in your quote marks
That I should be capitalized
It's you, not u
The overuse of ellipses isn't necessarily grammatically incorrect, it's just a style issue.
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:25
LinkTear * Rips ShadowDaFox's eye out and plays in the blood *
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:25
Link(Slaps tear hard) DO IT AGAIN OR I STAB
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:26
LinkTear * Grabs a orange chair * " Stand on it"
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:26
Link(Puts eyepatch on self)
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:26
LinkNope
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:26
LinkTear * Laughs * " You cant kill me!"
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:27
LinkI can kick your ass to the sun
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:27
LinkTear " Wanna bet??"
SmilingNyan
22.11.2017 02:28
LinkThis OC is obviously an edgelords attempt at a murderous character. I've seen many exactly like this before, it's nowhere near unique and it's honestly just saddening that you thought this was a good idea. Your stupid edgy murder character won't leave an impression on anyone with that personality.
SmilingNyan
22.11.2017 02:28
LinkOh, and they're OP as hECK
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:28
Link(Kicks tear to da dun)
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:29
LinkSun*
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 02:30
LinkTear * Returns raps noose around neck and laughs * " dont do that again"
SmilingNyan
22.11.2017 02:38
LinkThis is honestly the most edgy thing I've ever seen and I troll around the creepypasta tag on Quotev for cringe
LonerFuntimeFoxy
22.11.2017 02:45
Linkmhm same
ShadowDaFox
22.11.2017 02:48
Link...
tazzybear[OP]
22.11.2017 12:54
LinkSmilingNyan, i really don't care what you have to say abut my characters. I feel they are cool, as well as others do. Juts because you don't like my " edgy character " doesn't mean others don't. Tear happens to have many fans and friends. so, if you would not like to get hate messages criticizing one of your characters, i suggest you don't come here only to hate on my character.
Gillian
22.11.2017 17:27
LinkSmilingNyan,saying this is cringe is being cringe
Gillian~
katelyn: um hi tear you are very.....gorey today would you like some.....b-blood for a drink?
